Differences Between a Personal Recount and a Factual Recount

...Differences...

The diffrence between a personal and factual recount is that the in the personal recount the writter is involved the are writting about somthing that they have done or been involved in the story is like a jurnal or a diary just like if your saying to your friends what you did in the weekend, But with a factual recount the story is about history or news somthing isn't to do with the writter.

my holiday recount

On the last week of the holidays on the Thursday I asked my mum if could get a pet Guinea pig or a bird she replied with a definite "no" but i wouldn't budge "please mum please" but then she said talk to your dad, he wasn't very happy when i asked him so, i talked extremely fast so in the end he said whatever ask your mother. So then ran up the hallway again and i said to mum that dad doesn't mind. She looked at me with her mad face on and then she smiled and said all right then we will go to the pet shop tomorrow to see what options we have by the the way this was late at night so I went straight to bed to kill the time of waiting. My alarm went off early the next morning mum was already awake and so was my sister when I got dressed mum hoped in the car and turned the key and the car started I raced out side and jumped in the back seat and then we drove through town to drop off some letters that needed to be posted. We begun heading for the pet shop at this time I was so excited we pulled in the drive for the pet shop we parked the car and me and my sister practically through our selves out of the car and raced in side I went to look at the birds first. Some of them were really cute but really expensive so they were out of the picture. I left the bird room and slowly made my way to the aquarium part of the store I had a good look around then I saw the turtle but then I saw the price, So they were out of the picture but then I looked at the ginea pigs there was a gorgueos one, so I asked if I could please hold the cute little one so she pulled it out of its cage and I held it then I said to my mum this is the one I want so then mum brought and that made my day and my holiday!!

my swoop fun

Well, it all started with b2 coming to school extremely early well not that early about 15 to 8 but not all of b2 came because some of us were sick. when the bus arrived at the school Matua called us in and begun to call out the roll. When your name was called you could then go and take your seat on the bus as soon as everybody got on the bus we then left the school and went to the Agrodome for the sheep show. We had to wait for a little while until it was time to enter into the sheep show stadium, we all took our seats and waited patiently. the show began when everybody was seated. The show was fun and interesting.It went on for a while but we all loved it.But as soon as you Know it it was over. We left the stadium and went to go sit down to have a quick meal. After that we left to go to the Agroventures we slowly made our way there while looking at the sites to be seen. when we arrived at the Agroventures office matua told us to sort our selves into three's they would be the people you would do the swoop with we lined up and waited for your turn to come My friends and I were probablythe 6th pair to go. When our turn came we had to diside who would pull the rope up the top when your 40 meters above the ground both of my friends didn't want to so i said I would. We hoped into the sacks and the zips were done up and then the crane slowly pulled us up we got to the top and theintructor down the bottom told me to pull the rope I yaked it really hard and nothing happend so i did it a second time and then it happend my stomach raced into my head and I screamedw swand back and forth with my and my friends screaming we had so much fun!!!!

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