Wednesday, October 15, 2008

my holiday recount

On the last week of the holidays on the Thursday I asked my mum if could get a pet Guinea pig or a bird she replied with a definite "no" but i wouldn't budge "please mum please" but then she said talk to your dad, he wasn't very happy when i asked him so, i talked extremely fast so in the end he said whatever ask your mother. So then ran up the hallway again and i said to mum that dad doesn't mind. She looked at me with her mad face on and then she smiled and said all right then we will go to the pet shop tomorrow to see what options we have by the the way this was late at night so I went straight to bed to kill the time of waiting. My alarm went off early the next morning mum was already awake and so was my sister when I got dressed mum hoped in the car and turned the key and the car started I raced out side and jumped in the back seat and then we drove through town to drop off some letters that needed to be posted. We begun heading for the pet shop at this time I was so excited we pulled in the drive for the pet shop we parked the car and me and my sister practically through our selves out of the car and raced in side I went to look at the birds first. Some of them were really cute but really expensive so they were out of the picture. I left the bird room and slowly made my way to the aquarium part of the store I had a good look around then I saw the turtle but then I saw the price, So they were out of the picture but then I looked at the ginea pigs there was a gorgueos one, so I asked if I could please hold the cute little one so she pulled it out of its cage and I held it then I said to my mum this is the one I want so then mum brought and that made my day and my holiday!!

3 comments:

Jayme said...

Hey

Its a really exciting recount but before you publish maybe you could check for lowercase i's and grammar.

Tiria said...

Hey

Yea just like Jay said just check your spelling but great story

Jack said...

Cool I heard about your guinea pig's